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At first i couldnt see the guys having the chainsaw battle, till i got closer to my screen.
The border doesnt match the signature and it diverts my eyes from the focal point.
The lighting from the chainsaws is good i really like that.
and nice choice of game GoW2 is an amazing game
~Heepsy
yea, i had to make them further away though if i wanted to get the chainsaws in :(
i'll try and improve on my borders for next time :)
thanks for the comments :D
lack of depth there
try burning around the saws for more attractions
remove the noise
and text is awful as well as border
But ur growing
i was the same a month ago XD
Keep it up :D
same thoughts as the comment above, it lacks some contrast. Use the dodge tool as well as the burn tool for lighting.
thanks for the feedback guys :) im sure this will help me improve
