New one

I`m really happy with end product
what do you think? comments for it?
http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/1979/wipnn3.jpg

text is pretty good but i'm not sure about the smuding of the render. I reckon the render and effects need to be more solid and crisp, i prefer your current.

oops, just read the posting rules and realised i cant refer back to past signatures, my bad.

i want use different style in this one
more comments pls