bobo's garage

this is my 3rd sig ever made :D:D i've been reading lots of tutorials here and this is a combination of some of them...please comment so i can improve

http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/127...ghtfulcopy.jpg

very good for your 3rd sig. very good. you can tell you have followed tutorials here. keep it up.

lighting should come from the top right though. Look at the shadows on her face and under chin and other parts of focal.. The light comes from the bottom right on yours. also think it is better to have text closer to focal. otherwise it becomes distracting when the focal is too far away. takes the eye and attention away from the focal