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Here the deal:
Effects are pretty nice but the canvas is too big.
It detracts from the render because the effects are so big.
Next time, try a smaller canvas, smaller effects, and blend more.
Make that C4D blend in with the rest of the sig, don't just stick it in the middle right there. :D
It's pretty nice work, you just have to work on flow and getting out of the "random effect placement" habit. :D
Check out some of the tuts that we have.
^^ agreed
i don't like the effects over her face much either.