New Signature - War

CnC

http://i43.tinypic.com/14ceczm.jpg

~Dangt351

not bad, try nlurring the other soldiers and tank thing they take away from the main render and try blending the render in more doesnt look right, the text needs a little work, needs to be blended in some instead of just out there like the render, over all its pretty good just some basic things need to be done

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Originally Posted by Fur

not bad, try nlurring the other soldiers and tank thing they take away from the main render and try blending the render in more doesnt look right, the text needs a little work, needs to be blended in some instead of just out there like the render, over all its pretty good just some basic things need to be done

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Thanks for the advice, I'll try this on another sig that's similar at a later date.

~Dangt351

Nice depth. The text again is your weak point. The compo has been thrown off by having the focal all the way over on the left. The effects seem a bit sparse too leaving the sig a bit empty.

I don't see how to make my text blend in more.
Any help?


~Dangt351

Make the text 50% grey in colour move away from the corner and get rid of drop shadow.

you can also do what I do make it very small and change opacity to like 10%

The thing that I don't like is that there are two focal points.
I flick my eyes back and forth between the two prominent soldiers, and that isn't good.
The depth is awesome, but as RnC said, the composition is weird because the soldier in the foreground is so far to the left.
Keep it up, your making progress! :D