Clarity

http://i40.tinypic.com/mj1pwy.jpg
used roughly 5-6 pics i know the sides need a bit of work but that becuase i didnt add any levels

i like it but i'm not sure the washed out look is working. Possibly needs a bit more detail and colour.. theres no depth because the whole canvas is taken up. Good blending of different pics though, cleanly executed.

thanks man i tried creating depth by darkening the edges but i dont think it work probably because the render took up all of the canvas anyway

Hm, it's not bad.
But as catch said, it's a bit washed out, could use some more colour.
I really like the idea, and the lighting on the face is good.
Text is pretty good too, but could have a bit less random illegible parts.
Just get that colour back if possible and this one'll look quite nice. :D