smoking kills

http://i41.tinypic.com/dders6.jpg

http://i44.tinypic.com/mmy3x4.png

Right hand side looks empty and need some text. Effects look really good but maybe too over sharpened, try blurring it a bit to create some depth.

thanks...but that's grunge it's a part of style :) and with that oversharpen i created atmospher :) and i dont know work with text :)

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Originally Posted by spooner

thanks...but that's grunge it's a part of style :) and with that oversharpen i created atmospher :) and i dont know work with text :)

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Im not agreeing with you when you say with that oversharpen i created atmosphere. I think what happend when you oversharpened is that you created distraction. My eyes can really focus on the man now it just wondering around the sig. The effects and the compo looks pretty neat no complaints there, i just wish you would turn the sharpen down a bit so that its more clear to where the focal point is. It doesn't need to be overshapened to be grunge.

ok...maybe i gonna edit it

Update on this, the black and white version is way better its more easy to focus there and the shapness isnt so distractive there on the colored one it is though

Awesome grungy style, it's just a bit blank thats all.
Nice on both versions, good tag. :D

Amazing effects here great tag
U should make a tutorial on this one

thanks all :) i reduced the noise little bit :)
http://i41.tinypic.com/eq1itc.png

i guess the thing ruining it is too much effects
the c4d's arnt cr8tng any atmosphere.