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Awesome stuff!
Keep the effects off of the face though, that is too much.
Text is cool and the effects are pretty decent.
Just not much flow, thats what you need to work on.
Move some things around until it flows better!
actually i dont think flow is needed there peter
btw except that blue tone on her face everything is cool