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i dont like compo...
Jon that doesn't help the artist at all. tell them how to fix it, or what they can do to make it better.
I agree with jon though the compo isn't good. The head is wayy to big. You need to downsize that thing a lot, give yourself mroe room to play around in. Right now oyu have like nospace.
The coloring is cool, adn the left side is sick but it rly doesnt blend because it's only that oe tiny spotwhere her head isnt.
not bad overall just scale down her head and then work on making the sig more unified.
agree with paoa,
and alsos the head seems a bit oversharpened
and dont make the lighting too intense.KIU