The Suralious Potion

well im not so hot at poetry, but were doing it atm in english so yeah o.O
based on the poem "the Jabberwocky", our teacher wants us to have it rhyme and use nonsense words =P


Deep in the depths of the froilous ocean
sits the surprisingly suralious potion,
Waiting for amphilious travelers
to discover its amazing interious power.

Whereupon several finettes shall pass,
with a hoot and a holler and a flatulent gas,
And uncover what ferretious men did scramble,
in the old times of scemulous mumble and mamble.

For when the old fellisk will open its maver,
when the marilious merrons lirifit their scavers,
the suralious potion of the froilous ocean
will gerrim its harret with fraudulent motion.

And when the harret is gerrimmed with motion,
the suralious potion of the froilous ocean
will truly reveal its deepest dark derit
and bestow unto us a shiny new ferret.

With this we might invent a big tirry jortun,
or perhaps we'll destroy the fortress of Horton,
or maybe torafice the terrific tay'd terrum
and utter to them the old fornings of ferrum.

If these things should come to pass,
then maybe we're not meant to marray the morass,
In which case we'd derifle the burrenious forum
And revel in newfound stantaneal glorum.

But if the events which I've forellously stated
must truly be so parely debated,
Let us commence at once this werrephing
and finish at last this pointless glarephing.

For deep in the depths of the froilous ocean
sits the surprisingly suralious potion,
Waiting for such furnums as us
to find out it's secret of glarum and frus.

TBH
that owns :)

IMO that is AWSSSSSSSOOOOOMMMMEEEE welll done

That is beautiful. I think you should explore poetry more, who knows, you may have something here.