Control and Desire - wip

Is it a suitable name for it? Meh Loss of Control perhaps.. anyways C&C it's still a wip but I'm running outta ideas. Please help!

http://fc44.deviantart.com/fs43/f/20...arkPancake.jpg

rly nice :D
i will get owned on battle :) hihihi ....

Most likely won't use this as my entry. Running outta ideas! :S

Nice C4D work. Smudging isn't doing it for me - seems a bit lazy. The left side is great at the moment but you really need to work on the right side to bring it out. Other than that, freaky naughty. :D

Yea my exact thoughts Stig :S The smudging was generally to merge the two stocks and give it a nice BG for other effects, although I just got some smexy ideas like a split second into reading this.

Those clouds look a bit bright and light to fit the left side. Maybe kill the contrast a bit, that might bring the focal point out a little more. I was kind of confused about which side to look at first. The bright clouds kind of take away from the face.

I'll be filling in the right side with more C4D work, got it in my head now. Thanks for the comments :)

It's WIP so you know it needs more. :D
I think you need to fix up the effect a bit.
It looks a bit overdone.
I also don't like the colours, make them more vibrant. :P