Okay dokay,was working on some lighting stuff, and it looks okay to me.
V1:http://i85.servimg.com/u/f85/12/65/57/62/halo_s11.png
V2:http://i85.servimg.com/u/f85/12/65/57/62/halo_s12.png
Cnc please.
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Okay dokay,was working on some lighting stuff, and it looks okay to me.
V1:http://i85.servimg.com/u/f85/12/65/57/62/halo_s11.png
V2:http://i85.servimg.com/u/f85/12/65/57/62/halo_s12.png
Cnc please.
Definitely V1. Second is too monotone. On the first one, try to lighten up the left side a little bit. Try to bring out the colors a little more also. Looks good other than that.
v1. very nice render i like that
First one is by far the best.
Awesome light source, that is a really great effect.
A little empty on that right side, but it does have a statement the way it is.
Text isn't great, it's just too hard to read, make it legible, but subtle at the same time. :D
So far one of the best Ive seen on this site, the light source you have here is so good and you should go with that, as in continue to work with exactly what you've done here.
The Focal point is so strong on the shoulder/helmet that it almost gets our attention away from the negative right, almost. Which ISN'T a bad thing, If your going to leave a negative, never leave it an empty color, smudge some of the leftovers on it and use some displacement filters.
If you have any questions or want to learn something I just re-installed PS. And will be glad to answer your ? or anyone else's questions.