Newest sig CnC

this is my 4th sig i think so i am still learning and need a lot of advice.
http://i417.photobucket.com/albums/p...1/Backside.png

It's not bad for a beginner, you get flow more than some people.
Text needs work, it's too weird, just keep text simple.
Colours aren't great either, the background doesn't work with the brushes.
Try to smudge more, instead of just using brushes.
Read a few tuts with smudging in them and you'll improve a lot. :D