smokin

Was focussing on my c4d work to try to improve
experimented on the text for teh lulz xD
http://i544.photobucket.com/albums/h...g?t=1239309492

cnc thanks :D

the use of c4d is ok could do with a little improving and the colours dont match the pic,apart from that its good

yeah i agree, i was trying to make the guy stand out more, the pic was a bit monotone before i started lol
thanks

I think it looks pretty awesome man,the c4d's look great, and the text is pretty nice too.

thanks alot mate :)

Good job man, perhaps would've smudged around a bit more to make the guy stand out more, but otherwise nice.

The text does look pretty awesome.
The left part of the C4d catches my eye a bit to much and distracts my eyes from the focal maybe blur it a bit or something. Other than that It looks good and nice C4d placement.

I actually like the contrasting colours, mainly because there is alot of scenery in this so it kinda passes for being grass :p. Which I think is rather creative and it does work tbh.

I LOVE your text, I've always been very critical of text, even though my own is not perfect and I truly think you have text right on the dot there, it looks amazing.

Very nice sig, lots to look at, there is no OBVIOUS focal - I think the whole thing is a focal... if that makes sense, nothing grabs the attention directly which allows you to look at the whole sig at once and appreciate all the details in each part.

Very niiiice.

wow thanks guys really appreciate the comments and have helped alot.
ill make V2 taking on board all your comments

Cheers!!!

slick job with the c4d's.
the text IMO doesn't match as well as it could.
the colours are a bit off.
well done.