Hellgate

Hey guys new sig CnC please :)

http://i572.photobucket.com/albums/s...9339/sig15.png



Thanks :).

commments ny1 no?

Too busy effects everywhere too tall Text is okay Very monotone, blurred too much in the background, doesnt blend terribly well.

I think it's a bit out of focus. There are areas too blurred and others too sharp, I actually had a bit of trouble finding out what the actual render was until I looked a little closer.

It's also a bit big, and I'm not a fan of the text.

I do like the lighting very much though. :D

lighting and text is awsokme but i think its too blurred keep it up man:)

Hmm over blurred dave :S i use to get comments on that all the time :S try not to use as much blur or not use it at all mate :S its to monotone add a colour balance and add some different colours and photo filters :D the text is ok it seems to sharp maybe change the text to smooth version of it also the "Dave" text doesn't fit in :s try and find some text that blends in with the tag :D The lighting is very good on this tag but the compo is not :S he is facing out of the tag and behind him is the empty space :S he should be facing right which would be good compo :D

I have used that stock before here was my turn out of it :D:

http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/459/signature58.png

Mine was abit overtopazed like xD :D

it's too sharp in some areas and too blurred in others. you know you're too sharp when you get the steps of doom, (zig-zag effect on diagonal lines) liek on the helmet crucifix.

it seems too busy and parts of the helmet need toning down... too white.