the departed

trying something new, hopefully text is getting better

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Good Sig bro

Text needs a little work and maybe you should've stuck to one color on the c4ds and blend them in a little more.

I think the text -could- work. Don't use stroke, i think it looks nasty in most cases.
Tone down the colours of the text because they draw too much attention away from the focal.

I have a number of text tutorials on my blog that could help you.
When in doubt go with a block text like Helvetica or Impact, with
a Visitor subtext. Clean, neat and easy.