Freddy

Trying to decide which one I like better... Second one is a bit darker than the first.... Thinking about possibly adding "Sweet Dreams" somewhere on it...

Thoughts?

Thanks,
Dr D


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v9...to/freddy1.jpg

or

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v9...to/freddy3.jpg
Credit to: Bob_Magic for the C4D's (they're from his Halo3 tut)

Could use some text, too much light from the left - very distracting.

needs text and the face is a little bit oversmudged!

looks pretty good though!

maybe the c4d or flow cud be parallel to his fingers. and it will be nicer. keep the rythm:D nice work.

try working on the lighting, you have to manny light sources
away from the render when its the one you want to light up.
i like the render placement.

huge negative spot in the middle.. soften it up a bit

Thanks all, for the comments. I will work on this later today! I appreciate the help, as I am still trying to into this stuff!!!...