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Hello guys. New signature, still practising with C4D's and learnt something new with text called "Outer Glow" ;) Took me about 45 minutes.
Outcome:
V1:
http://i39.tinypic.com/nnwb2x.jpg
V2:
http://i40.tinypic.com/16lk2s1.jpg
Comments/Critique obviously welcome. :)
Don't use outer glow on text it ruins the whole signature :(
No scanlines. Definitely no to Outer Glow. Try to stay away from blending options on text.
Whoa. Scary. lol
Yeah don't use outer glow, it doesn't fit in with the sig.
V1's better than V2 the lines look weird and don't flow.
But good try.
Keep to basic fonts, and like already said, don't use blending options with text as a general rule.
The only reason I did that was so you could actually see the text, I'll upload a version with it, gimme 2 minutes.
EDIT: Here you are, no scanlines, no outter glow:
http://i41.tinypic.com/ae7dki.jpg
I like it, looks very comic style type with those nice solid colours.
No scan lines. The text doesn't look good above his head, you could put it like in front of his mouth. The text itself doesn't look good anyway. You should change the font and probably use a different colour. (I'd like to see a nice bright red :9)
Also, just being picky but there's a red line around his mouth which I personally don't like. Don't know about the others though.
Colours are really awesome, and the render placement and effects are good.
Text isn't so great, don't use the default colour of the outer glow, in fact, don't use the outer glow at all. :D
There is also a big black space on the left side, so if you fix those few things, it'll be great!
too dark, maybe some lights.
I think its been said enough but maybe one more time, different font and color and no scanlines :]
I agree move the placement of the font
