First serious c4d work

http://i562.photobucket.com/albums/s...etagcopy-1.png

ok this is my first time using a lot of c4d effects in a tag and i would greatly appreciate cnc, not too sure about it:)

Thanks ,
Scribz0rz XD

Needs a better focal, all I can see is the t shirt. The backgrounds very dull aswell. The Splatter brush is way too visible and the effects colors are way too contradicting. Yellow on blue is very bad and it seems they stand out a bit too much. Try experimenting with different settings.

ok thought the colours looked alright myself but thats ur opinion xD

any more suggestions?

i had ti squint my eyes to make out the person, work on
lighting and dont put alot over c4d over the focal.

kk ty:)

The render.. .whatever it is.... is not bleded it just looks sharp and bright. work with that next time.

resize the render and delete the c4ds that are on the render,make it brighter and it should be beter, add a light source or two

I agree with sssk. Also add soemthign to the BG. Right now it's just liek black. Could rly use some help.

ok ty:)