Time Shift Sig......

Please be gentle i am new to graphics and taking inspiration from on here i have put together a Time Shift sig........

http://i465.photobucket.com/albums/r...o1583/time.jpg

I don't like it, it's way too dark and grungy. very sharp and i never have loved embossed text.
plus it's huge

top of the helmet looks weird and the text is bad

Not bad. The BG is cool, however the text needs a bit of work. i suggest you read my text tutorial to learn a bit more about text it might help you a bit. It's in the text tutorials area at the top.