Colours (WIP)

mmKay, this is the first signature I made to get into Splinters team :).Still a WIP I think.I'm not sure if i should add anything or take anything away, so CnC.
http://i85.servimg.com/u/f85/12/65/57/62/colour10.png

The right hand side is too empty and its messy especially dat stray of line on his shoulder
Ders no flow and it needs text
I like the colours tho

Not everything needs text and a border y'know :S.But thanks for the cnc.

i ddnt said u need border just text
If der was i border i think it kinda ruins it

nice coulrs (everyone is making colourful sigs now ;D)
but imo is a but messy on the focal and far right side needs more
or you could just cut it where the yellow stops, but thats just me.

mmKay here is my updated version :):
http://i85.servimg.com/u/f85/12/65/57/62/colour11.png

The effects are too sharpened and over contrasted if you ask me, And too much of the effects are on the body of the render. Try toning down the C4D's and try some clipping masks, Smudging, And brush filters. Test could be a little more visable and a better font would have sufficed.

Would look a lot cleaner and fresher if the effects weren't covering up so much of the dude. They are cool effects and all but IMO would look a lot less messy.

Bump

Updated again :).
http://i85.servimg.com/u/f85/12/65/57/62/colour12.png