Trapped

http://suddu001.deviantart.com/art/Trapped-120123914

http://th05.deviantart.com/fs43/300W...y_Suddu001.jpg


Hey guys! CnC!

PS: I'm not giving [img] tags coz some members who have low internet speed may not be able to view it !

CnC! Is this an improvement??

It's good but the perspective is all off in my opinion. Everything seems to be at different angles from a front on view, when it should all be the same. For example the heart, you can see alot of the heart he's standing on, yet the triangle trapping him only shows a slight part of it because it's at a much different angle.

his hair needs a better cutout, its a little empty for a lp, there are amazing efffects near the focal, the moon thing on the top right is all wrong, and doesnt fit, although the source of lighting you added was good

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Originally Posted by SSSSK

his hair needs a better cutout, its a little empty for a lp, there are amazing efffects near the focal, the moon thing on the top right is all wrong, and doesnt fit, although the source of lighting you added was good

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exactly my thoughts, i like your shapes and so on you really evolved since you started this style, but one think is still the same your cutout needs polishing dude xD those white dots all around in his hair ruins the entire expression because then you think hey looks pretty slick and then thinking but he is a bit lazy :D i know it can be an arse to sit and cut out so loong time but better do the piece over some coupple of days and getting the best result than rushing to fast.

I guess you might have failed geometry :p. the 3d shapes are all from diffferent perpsectives.
this looks like more of a collage than an artwork because teh render is of differrent quality.
he looks sort of foggy.

@ Daemon! Yeah! I'm really lazy..damn! I'm trying to change ! And this was an experimenttion :DThanks for the comments!

gave u props on Da