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I'm sorry to say, vbut the render doesn't fit the BG imo.
The bg is a sick piece of art, just so you know. Great colors. I'd actually like to see how it is like an abstract bg?
But with the render, try to blend it a bit better. Layer mask and a roound soft edge brush or somethng;)
Text is also ok;)
Big improvement on backgrounds. This seems very texturised and grungy. Once again though, text lets you down. Try make it smaller and remove the Signatures phrase as it's pretty unnecessary in my opinion. Then make it smaller and move it closer to the focal. The render itself needs better blending. The color palettes ok but it seems to stand out too much as a singular render, instead of being at one with the piece. (I'm a samurai!) Overall, big improvement ;)
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*Agrees with splinter*
The background is great but the render doesn't fit in :s
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