my sotw movies - sin city

http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/6...tysotwcopy.jpg

let me know.. i hardly ever do sigs

make another one...no offense..
text is horrid,
cant see the focal and get rid of that red thing you've done..
the stock is good imo...give it a 2nd try...
this one (sig) is a bit "heavy", if you get me, make it "lighter"...
dont like the square pattern on the right.. and adjust the contrast a bit..

overall...i like the left side and i hate the right side :| sort it out mate...

I think it's a bit confusing...the red streak, I know is a theme from the movie, but it doesn't really fit well.
If I were you I would take the advice of Deadless and try again.
The left side is perfect, but the right side just confuses me, it's almost two focals.
If you wanted to completely try again, but keep the Sin City theme, try the girl in the red dress, make her black and white, but the bright red dress, and put some roses around it, be creative with some red C4D's, if you did it right, I bet it would look great. :D

I like the overall outcome, just not the "Sin City" text...looks out of place in the style of it.

I agree with the other, the text dosnt fit very well.

Same, text is horrible, but the other part (the actual image) is alot better, doesnt need any improvement imo

Helix the right side is killing it. :(