Pain!

http://suddu001.deviantart.com/art/Pain-120848289

http://suddu001.deviantart.com/art/Pain-120848289

Comments and favorites on Da appreciated!
I had lots of fun while doing this!

looking pretty good so far but maybe blend the text down a little bit!

Posted on your dA :)

Hahah, you took my advice on brightening it up a bit then. It's nice but I think the lines are a bit too squiggly for me. Also seems a bit too sketchy. I love the idea but I think maybe work on the curves and shaping of the letters, awesome idea though. Nice job.

You did great with your shadow :)

I really like it, and it's done pretty well, but it seems a bit LQ to me, other than that, it's pretty fantastic. :D