"Beautiful" Signature

v1
http://i248.photobucket.com/albums/g...ulsigncopy.jpg

v2
http://i248.photobucket.com/albums/g...ifulsignv2.jpg

There just a few differences between the 2 versions, just adjustments.

i think maybe u need to sharpen or mess with the brightness and contrast. the effects are nice but i think they need to be brought out a bit more

Sharpening the focal would be a good idea, unless that foggy look is what you're going for. V2 is the better of the two.

What's going on with the right of the signature? The wiggly lines?

to me, the sig is blurry for some reason...render is also hard to see,

like the colors, and the idea

i believe if u sharpened the sig, worked on the render a bit, and maybe made the sig just a little smaller, it would be a lot better :)

Version 2 is best, but Its to blurry.

The size is way to long and small, to much empty space.

And Yeah, the right sides lines dosnt fit.

V2 is better, as v1 looks very grainy, but it is still very blurry on its own.

if her face was a little sharper it would improve the whole sig.

sharpen a bit and v2 is way better!

sig seems a little bit big!

I've followed some of your "tips" and I made the third version.It looks better, imo

http://i248.photobucket.com/albums/g...ifulsignv3.jpg

Nice.

Right side is way better now. Maby wanna blur the edges and burn the sides of the pic.

Then youre ready to shine ;)