Creed

newest.
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Originally Posted by Bluiceflamez

newest.
http://i308.photobucket.com/albums/k...evised/CS4.png

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Pretty nice but you should of blurred his right arm a bit.

Right side feels a little wierd.
The light source coming from the left throws off the lighting a bit.
I like what you were going for though. :)

I'm not feeling the flow here. Choice of colours is alright. Text a little small but I can see that it's in your style to make your text small and almost unreadable. Small text is cool, but not too small for your primary text.

Light source (or is it a C4D? lol) doesn't match with the brighter area on the render's right side. It's pretty obvious from the render that the light should be coming from the right side instead of left. Of course, you could always do some major editing but I'd change the position of the light source if I were you.

looks pretty good, text needs a bit of kerning looks scrunched!

light source have on the right side as the render have, text too small can't read it, maybe its your style. im not really fan of the chosen color tho overall its a decent tag:D

http://i308.photobucket.com/albums/k...sed/Newest.png

Fixed a little.
Give more C&C I'll fix after my game.