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I really like it too, the C4D usage is good, the colours are brilliant, text could use some more work but otherwise good job, keep it up! :D
Thanks man ^u^
The text stays, i kinda like it that way thou ;)
i like the left side alot, nice flow there, but the c4d on the right are a bit chaotic, they dont flow that well. looks nice, try not centering focal next time.
I like it, but some of the C4D's are just TOO chaotic. :D
I love the colours, but you need to make some of the C4D's more subtle.
Render doesn't always have to be right in the middle.
And I think the text could use a bit of work.
Nice job.
I have to, and i want to have render in the middle. Beacuse i wanted to add an effect that goes from both sides and if i move him towards an edge i loose that, and doesnt have much space to work on one of the sides.
So im sticking to that ;)
I might change the right sides c4d's when i get home from work.
Thanx guys ^u^
not that bad, it could use some more work tho, the text is bad, needs more work, text above phsycadellic is unreadable. The lighting is not right, if you look at the render's face he is lit from the left side, but you have lighting coming from both sides. some parts of render are overcontrasted, the sig is kind of lacking in depth, and the colors could pop more imo. good job tho man it's a start of a really good sig don't stop workin on it, it could be really good.
I think you're using an appropriate text, but the main flaw is the lighting. One's eyes travels around the outside for a while, then finally notices the render, which is supposed to be the focal point.
Good color balance though! Keep it up!
