Spiderman

well, everyone has one. i didnt like my last one, made it long long time ago.

http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/d...122/spidy2.jpg
http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/d...122/spidy3.jpg
http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/d.../spidycopy.jpg

except that its too red its good

I prefer red one.But like said too much red.Agree with that.
But I'm missing the text. :S

The red one!

Tone down the red and add black to the edges of the sign.

Looks a bit empty too, maybe ad some more effects

Erase the edges of the render to make it blend in better;)

It's a bit too monotone imo. Perhaps when your smudging throw in some dark browns/reds to help with the coloring, otherwise though it's nice. Your smudgings improving well ;)

I don't think he smudge at all. It just looks like c4d's who's rippled.

The rain on spidey who looks like smudge or clip mask is at the original render.

k thannks guys, for radillac, no C4d in these all smudge and smoe liquify.
i didnt focus much on the colour, wanted it to be BnW. ty for CnC. anyone else?

The red one is deffinantly the best, like others have said just tone it down a bit. Can I have the link to the render please? :)

just search spiderman in planet renders, it was a render not stock.

Nice job, I really love the red one.
Effects are awesome, but you could have used maybe one more colour, like a deep blue or a black.
Keep it clean like your others, don't add the text, I think it looks better raw. :D