um use less sharpen. it ruins
blur some places and sharpen some. For e.g. blur the man and c4d here n there and sharpen the gun.
spatter effects are cool but u should erase some to make it look cooler.
the c4d is good but its disrupting the flow. its like its changing the course of the flow.
text looks good but wrong place ment and color
put it somwhere else or dont put it. not necessary u always put text.
erase some effects over the gun barrel
overall it loks good
here's a tip. if u think the area is empty somewhere, dont pile up c4d's there to fill it up it wont look good. try some creativity there :D
Good luck :)
05-04-2009, 12:25 PM
cc.RadillacVIII
Youre best so far.
As always to sharpened. Remove the smudge from the gun and erase some of the effects on his shoulder and right side too. Add some smoke to the gun ;) erase the edges of the render.
Name needs some more visibility, my fav font thou :P
Smudge the render more and with better flow and blend.
Light source needed.
Keep it up ;)
05-04-2009, 01:03 PM
Fuzer
Its pretty good, but imo the left doesnt match the right side at all, i prefer the larger one, but i cant stress enough, use screen as a layer blend instead of colour/linear dodge, it gives a much nicer effect, and they are generally nice and smooth, if you prefer the jagged look thats fine, you can still sharpen the layer, but dont over do it.
Parts of the tag are really over sharpened, some grainy-ness is good, but its way over done in this tag, its a nice idea the text is decent, but could be improved apon
