Potter

Hey guys been abit busy with coursework and other stuff like that and ive just got the time to make a quick tag :D

C&C Please

http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/4534/signature124.png

Thanks :D

awsome.

looks quite lq. nice smudging and effects but the colors are rather dull also.

The sharp things on the right steals all the focuse from the Harry.

Its really empty and boring.

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Originally Posted by RadillacVIII

The sharp things on the right steals all the focuse from the Harry.

Its really empty and boring.

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Mate your suppose to comment on peoples work and how they could improve, not just slag them off your suppose to help...

I actually really like those effect things on the right. Don't know what they are but try bringing em closer to Harry. They just appeal to me >.< The lighting in this is nice but the colors are quite dull at the moment. Obviously from the scene I can tell it's that really gay grey stock that I've seen, so this isn't your fault. Maybe try gradient mapping the background ? I dunno. But nice job anywhos.

Oh Sorry dude ^u^

As I said needs something that catches ones attention. Maby smudge the render some more or add clip mask.
About the light. I think Its placed a little to much on the right, nearer his head would be good.
Add some bling bling?

Try to make it more colorfull too.

Good basics, and as you said, just a quickey tag ^u^

I don't really think this is the basics tbh. It's quite nice seeing as he's been off for a bit.

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/c...g?t=1241559949

Thats the stock ive used :D

lol He looks like a little boy who just got separete from his parents ^u^

When i use a stock i always render it, to give myself some more freedom.