Typography

ok so this is my first ever typography and before anyone says i just made the letters different colours and then outer glowed it...i didnt>.< text took me ages.

http://i562.photobucket.com/albums/s...ribblecopy.jpg

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That looks really good. Imo, that "Typography" destroys it!!! :(

Yeah it looks awesome but the Typography bit kills it, i like the colours, the right side is a bit empty though.

yea i was thinking that... i might make a version without it, see what other poeple say first:)

any more comments?

yeah don't stamp it, we already know what it is :P

It's nice but I think you should've played with the letters a bit more. Typographys like this or often about the actual lettering and playing with those, not just having them as a focal. Perhaps use some liquify or ripples or anything to spice it up. Also the outer glow on the text is very irritating. Scrap it imo. The typography text is just pointless, flat and doesn't go with the reflection scheme. I like the effects on the outside but bring them more to the text.

this tag is from a tutorial on cloud9 i used to use that tut, i like whats youve done but the top right is a bit empty