I did these pieces with the latest version of GIMP. The alleyway thing is for my solo metal project, Algarothsyum. The Lotus images are just something different I tried. Obviously, I posted the original of each pic, to show you what I've done with them.
if u ask me bluntly the originals look far better than ur work, I know it sounds harsh but for me thats the truth, although i like that desert eagle sig.
Text of ur logo in ur second post is so-so.
05-07-2009, 02:10 AM
navb01
id say first of all to only post a few images per thread its too hard to critique it when its a ton of different things!
second the lotus logo one isnt all that great but i do like the lotus one and the wall one they look great, some really nice effects!
05-07-2009, 07:16 AM
Hind
Ok. Too much stuff. Too messy. Slow down. Lol
Alright, since I'm such a nice guy, I took a look at everything a couple of times just to give you some nice opinionz.
I like what you did to the first photo, it's TOO blurred out though. I thought the Lotus logo looked pretty cool. I like the logo for your band or was it someone else's band? I forgot. Whatever, it's pretty good. That surveillance camera thing is something different and it turned out all right. I also like your second last sig, along with it's text.
It looks as though you like your work to be more, placement of renders/stocks instead of making the use of C4Ds, etc, which isn't a bad thing. I guess you could call that a style of your own. Of course, it would be good to learn how to use C4Ds and other effects in your work. Read some of the tuts here and you'll find yourself learning some useful stuff. Tbh, I think you need to work on improving your style. I like a few of your works but the others...
Anyhow, hope to see your improved style and works soon. :)
05-07-2009, 08:42 AM
ZonariAn
I actually took the photographs of the lotus, and for one I probably could have photoshopped the bird-poop out of the original photo....
05-07-2009, 08:44 AM
Hind
lol @ bird poop.
05-07-2009, 08:49 AM
Helix
tutorials are the path to greatness... it sounds stupid but its how i learned