GAMBIT -my latest

http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/7701/gambit.png

C and C appreciated:D

text ruins it.The flow is nice but i dont think the smooth bg goes with that type of render, not ur best but not bad:)

Scribble hit the nail on the head I think.

Great suggestions Scribble. :D +Rep'd.
Crop it a little bit, and lose the text.
Also, blur the background slightly to add more depth. :D
I've seen better LP's from you but it's not bad.

This looks so Gambit like. Choice of colour and the flow of C4D is great. Your text needs some work though. The font is good. Placement and colours need some work. Nonetheless, great job!

Thanks guyz for the comments, got lot to work with the txt lol:D

Text, change color and move to the left, never place a text on the render.
Erase Gambit's edges a bit, that will make it blend whit the bg better.
Corp, Yeah! Little bit to high i think.

You surely are the master of Marvel heroes ^u^ Love you're work!