first b&w

http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/3221/guitarsdx.jpg

Sorry dude, but the text iss horrible.Keep it small and simple for thos kind of signatures. And drop that black line, especially with drop shadow.

But apart from that, i think it could need more contrast.

Nice job

Gotcha, will update later.

Too much pentool?
Imo.

Updated, simpler text: http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/593/guitara.png

Probably did overdue it a bit with the pen tool, it was the first time I had gotten it to look halfway decent, got a little excited xD

Hmm, move the text off the render, and resize the YNK bit, make it a little smaller. Much better tho

Oh well, thats my oppinion at least. If you think it looks good, go for it

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Originally Posted by silentshadow

Hmm, move the text off the render, and resize the YNK bit, make it a little smaller. Much better tho

Oh well, thats my oppinion at least. If you think it looks good, go for it

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ofc, I appreciate your opinion, still fairly new at this and ill take all the input I can get.

Great job, loving the effects and I'm glad it's in black and white. :D
Text still isn't right, try making it grey, to match the sig a bit more, other than that, it's very nice.

It looks too big imo