Venom

http://i469.photobucket.com/albums/r...enomthasig.png

Just tell me what you think

A little too monotone

Agree with Fatal Switch, it's all the exact same colour. :D
I love the effect you have, of him just popping out, but I think the render could have been better, and the background/foreground could have been much darker. Try to get some depth by sharpening the focal, and blurring the background. :D

http://i469.photobucket.com/albums/r.../Venomdark.png

tryed everyting u said Ptka. Better?

I like that one alot more, the coulours come out more, and your drawn to render... Good Job!

Your second version is alot better. Nice effects, keep up the good work :)

Second one is looking a lot better. Keep it up! :D