Nature

Simple penwork and some effects with a stock background. The traditional Chinese in it means "nature".
Very minimalistic, but I enjoy it.
CnC please.
http://imgboot.com/images/arcanium/nature2.png

V2:
http://imgboot.com/images/arcanium/nature5.png

Nice I like it. :D
The text is fairly good, however I don't like those three squares, but the characters are great.
The pentooling is pretty good, but the sig is very bright in the middle.
I like the stock you used, and everything is placed fairly well, I would just try to make it darker a bit, and then take out those boxes. :D

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Originally Posted by Ptka

Nice I like it. :D
The text is fairly good, however I don't like those three squares, but the characters are great.
The pentooling is pretty good, but the sig is very bright in the middle.
I like the stock you used, and everything is placed fairly well, I would just try to make it darker a bit, and then take out those boxes. :D

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Thanks, I wasn't sure about the squares, they were generally just to fill in some room and extenuate the colors. I darkened it a bit and took the squares out and it came out a bit better imo.


Edit(had name from a different forum I posted this one)

http://imgboot.com/images/arcanium/nature5.png

MUCH better, we can actually see the clouds in the background!
Nice stuff, but I think you could move the characters down a little bit.
Other than that, it's perfect!
Nice work. :D

AND! Welcome to the Void.

the left seems random i cant really tell what that is. but if you dont want to get rid of it i think it is a little over blurred imo

V1 for me is the better.

I like the fact you have to look at it to see whats going on nice work.