Afro samurai

http://i42.tinypic.com/vmyflz.jpg
V.2 with a clear BG
http://i44.tinypic.com/ekm6pv.jpg
Cnc Plzzz........
Thank U........

Some pretty good effects, but they are slightly over-sharpened, and the render is blurry, not a great combination.
Text isn't bad, but maybe a bit of colour somewhere would be good.
You should crop the left side, because it's a bit boring.
Overall, it's good, just make sure to get the right definition of the render.