boredom

http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/54/gety.png

No cinema border this time(just for Fuzer ;))

text looks good, the small text is unreadable, dunno if that was intentional tho, the bg is kinda plain just looks like a radial gradient map with a c4d on it. maybe providing the stock to show what you actually did might help, nice border tho.

Woot <3<3 much love Ritz, however it seems kinda plain to me =/ not feeling this one dude

Oh Fuzer, your never happy God dammit! :p
I have to agree with Fuzer though, or he'll threaten me. :\ It is very empty without seeing the original stock it is very hard to tell what you've actually done. Sorry.

It's pretty good, but a bit simple.
I look at the text first however and it draws my attention more than the render does.
Just make it more subtle, and try a few effects to spice things up. :D