Robots from the future??

http://imgcash3.imageshack.us/img199/5584/mecha.png

http://imgcash6.imageshack.us/img190/9762/mecha2.png

this was a bit random....

focal is small and unclear, it also looks LQ.
not feeling it.

As tekken said its unclear, the effects look all mashed together, dont really like the compo and teh colours are awful and again it looks very LQ :S no where near up to your standards dead :S

The bottom one for sure, the top is just too many colours and too many effects.
Still a bit chaotic, and the render is very small and unfocused.
The effects that you have are nice, but they have no direction or flow. Work on it!