My First Sig Using c4d

Ok so this is my very first signature using a C4D render. Please give some constructive critisism and tell me how I could improve.

http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/3...edatorvoid.png

Thanks.

really nice , i like the collors , and the text, gj ! :)

First it's c4d.
Basic, but for your first sig with a c4d it's great. I really like it.

its pretty good can i ask which layer setting you used? because i find that lighten or screen gives a nice smooth effect

For the c4d I used colour dodge. Screen didn't give a very nice effect for this sig.

Great job, i cant get the hang of c4d's :confused: cant make them work .. but i suppose i should really work on simpler things 1st :p .. but i really lyk it :)