http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/s...an/2Pac2-1.png
IMPROVED VERSION:
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/s...an/2Pac2-4.png
CnC?
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Extremely plain but the colours blend well. Not mono at all. I know you can do better but I can't find nothing wrong really. But I think you placed the light source too far though.
Is this any better? I added a clipping mask with some brushes and moved the light source closer. I also added my name on every line.
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/s...an/2Pac2-4.png