The Sun

I was bored so i decided try to make a LP. I don't have much experience in this type of work, I played around with some C4D and 1-2 Stocks and the result is below:

http://i248.photobucket.com/albums/g...esunLPcopy.jpg

Not very bad I think :p

Pretty cool
i like the text:)
but i doesn't really gives that wow effect

Keep it up

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Originally Posted by flatty

Pretty cool
i like the text:)
but i doesn't really gives that wow effect

Keep it up

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thanks :)

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Originally Posted by Splinter.

It's really really badly LQ. It hurts my eyes.

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LQ? What that means? :D

Low Quality I expect... I think it's a good pic! It shows what the Sun could look like, and I like the text and effects...

Good work!

To me its way to caotic, i cant find a place to put my focus on, i know the white dot in the middle should be it, but to me its a bit boring and uninspireing ;s sorry, i rather have something i can see what is and focus on. The effects arent bad but there are a bit to much of everything :D