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This one isn't working for me so much.
It looks too much like a C4D stuck right in front a picture.
And the purple doesn't match the "Sunlight", should have been orange or red.
I would try and keep C4D's to accent, not cover up three quarters of the piece.
I agree^
But you're on the right path, but sometimes these subtle changes can make a huge difference.