4th Sig. CnC please

this is my 4th attempt. hpefully im getting better lol.

http://i324.photobucket.com/albums/k...gaidensig2.jpg

It's pretty good, but there are a couple things that bother me.
1) The momentum is choppy, you have blur going one way and the background going another, almost opposite direction.
2) The text is practically hidden, I didn't even see it first time round, and then I noticed you had more text overlapping it and I couldn't really read it.

I really can't get the hang of text, and i see what you mean about the momentum/flow.. didn't until you pointed it out though :confused:

very nice for a 4th sig the text is a little big and the smuging is a little over done

Yeahh 1st time using smudge lol wasnt sure really what to do with it, and jus saw a text tut with something along the lines of that and thought id give it a try