Large Piece - NSFW!!!!!

First LP... not a fan of the text...

http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z.../Firstcopy.png

CnC appreciated!

bg is too plain, blending is f#$ced up on the right side mostly, also the drop shadow on your pentool looks wierd. idk what to make of this really, it just seems rushed or unfinished. face is too dark also imo. keep working on it is my suggestion. hot chick tho

shes too orange.

I know of the tut you followed and imo it's not even close to it :S Not bad though, way too orange/brown and the text could be better. BG needs to be more vibrant, as does she.

omg those colors, it drops down your quality, remove that darkness over her face and chest, you made her stomach focal (maybe on purpose?)

remove this darkness and play with some gradient maps, and make colors less saturated to look realistic

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Originally Posted by Lewk

shes too orange.

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Too much spray on tan...