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hi guys.. hope ya all doing great..:D here iam again with v2 ... changed render.. font and resized it.. hmm i hope i covered all pointed u told me,, waiting for ur comments n i can adjust more :) http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/3...ge10617109.jpg
here is my first sig and hope to hear ur comments ...
http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/4913/image4620562.jpg
Bit of an oxymoron in the title there ;) The BG is insane! I can't concentrate on anything else. Render isn't blended that much, and the text is blurry. Good potential but just isnt executed well enough.
Looks pretty good, just watch that the text doesn't become the focal.
The background is awesome, but all of that pen tooling doesn't fit in with the rest.
It would actually be good to just a totally different render, it's such a good background, and a soccer render doesn't do it justice.
thank u guys n really ur comments r useful and i gonna make it once again after some adjustments u told me about ... thanks :)
That'd be great if you posted up another version, I'd love to see your improvement. :D
thanks for passing by again :) tomoro i will post the other v and will wait for u to comment on :)
very impressive for a first sig, not bad imo, pentooling needs work tho, when you get to a part where it is going behind the render or text erase as close to the render line as possible, and slightly blur the edges that touch the render. the text is cool imo, just too much of a focal point as said above. Imo I would make the text a little smaller, and maybe do the Manchester City part go the other direction and lose the City part, its obvious seems unneccesary. good job tho.
hi domino thank for this notes,,, i hope u all can take a look again n tell me what u think after adjustments :)
On the new version, I would make the actual canvas much smaller, and then try and create some effects on the person.
Blend some more with the smudge tool, maybe make half of him smudged away and fading into the background.
yes i will do this in v3 lol .. but i will wait for whoever wants to comment so i do all the adjustments at once.. :)
