Her name is Elly

Well first thing ive made in a long time! CnC
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s.../DreamEle2.jpg

Ha, that's pretty amusing, although I would have liked to see a bit more manipulation, like horns or something.
The colour of the wings might be better if it were slightly lighter, that black is darker than anything else in the piece.
Other than that, it's cool. :D

Why do you have orange name? :// I want one too. or green. rr..

oh. and your LP..
amazing. if we think HOW MUCH GFX are you doing :p

if you tweaked the wings, made them look as though they're above the elephant it needs more shadow and a gap between the wings and the elephant or atleast conceal it slightly around the front wing but take into consideration 3d, i mean imagine the wings onthe elephant they'd clearly be set out from the elephant slightly with the spine of the wing where it join to it's body.. there'd need to be a space or shadowing to show it's above it.

orr also the shadow in the water doesn't match the lighting of the backdrop you chose, this would need to face in a mirror of the position of your shadow now, also the composition, i think it's work better being either side of the scene like left or right and not in the middle, it'd give it more prominance as that's the light and the darkness of the scene oone or the other generally gives a different impression

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Originally Posted by Deadloader

if you tweaked the wings, made them look as though they're above the elephant it needs more shadow and a gap between the wings and the elephant or atleast conceal it slightly around the front wing but take into consideration 3d, i mean imagine the wings onthe elephant they'd clearly be set out from the elephant slightly with the spine of the wing where it join to it's body.. there'd need to be a space or shadowing to show it's above it.

orr also the shadow in the water doesn't match the lighting of the backdrop you chose, this would need to face in a mirror of the position of your shadow now, also the composition, i think it's work better being either side of the scene like left or right and not in the middle, it'd give it more prominance as that's the light and the darkness of the scene oone or the other generally gives a different impression

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could of just said it sucks :-P.
Thx for the feed back all

I want a coloury name too. Awesome piece by the by, I already commented in the chatbox.

Hehe Ive seen this done before xD its from that video damn whats it called? But I must agree with what Deadloader said, not bad defintly an improvement of what you have done earlier great keep the artjuices flow :D

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Originally Posted by Fur

could of just said it sucks :-P.
Thx for the feed back all

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Hahaha not at all, i just noticed what could've been changed to make it appear to people as finished when i saw it i noticed a few things and just changing a simple shadow can make all the difference. pretty cool though i find it funny actually :) not my favourite type of art but it's cool

lol guys his name is tht colour because hes a retired member of staff
i wood agree with dead here fur but it has promise.gj.

hooooooo Fur dont surpass me pls XD
GJ :D