'Flow'

New sig from me. C&C and choose which version you prefer.
cheers

V1:
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r...flowcopyBW.jpg


V2:
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r.../flow2copy.jpg


V3:
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r...1000/flow3.jpg

i like v3 bestm though the c4ds under her face look kinda low quality, other than that, the text is nice, though i would prefer it a little closer together. either way, nice job dude

yeah, 3 is the best. it's a bit chaotic though. some stuff on the left looks out of place. agreed with fuzer on text placement.

yea i had 3 fractal c4d's and 2 normal c4d's, so a lot going on. I do think it is a bit chaotic, and there was a lot of clipping masking going on as well :D. Cheers for the C&C

right, changed text a bit, put a border on so i'll leave it as that.

http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r...wfinalcopy.jpg

I like V2 a lot better just because it doesn't show the C4D's as much, it's more subtle.
Work on the text for sure, and change up the placement, try not to put text in the corners.
I also would have liked to see some more flow off of her hair, try to use that as a focal.

yea i agree, i prefered 2 because i thought 3 was just too chaotic and the c4d's were too bold. Yea i suppose the hair was the main feature of the the stock, should have done more there.


anyway, i keep messing around with this...

V1:
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r...final2copy.jpg

V2:
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r...inalcopy-1.jpg

Use the new V1 and then make it warmer, so it's more like the new V2 but not quite.

okay.. i'll just stick with this.

http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r...nal2copy-2.jpg

I like this one, it's monotone, but it's a good sort of monotone, mostly sepia. :D