InFamous.

C&C Please.
Sorry I haven't been on Forum much. School and crap. Anyway yea.

http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/9010/infamouss.jpg

What's going on? I have absolutely nowhere to look for a focal.

I suppose there is no focal. There was absolutly no Infamous renders I could use good (I've checked Planetrenders.) so I searched google.
So this picture came up. But I suppose Infamous is the focal.

focal is ALWAYS necessary....
create a focal and then we can start to critique this properly

^ Ding ding ding! Yes, we NEED a focal.

This is just too chaotic to begin!
My eyes see the focal and then it moves to something else!

Get on creating a focal; I'd suggest starting over again or erasing everything but the figure.

eto, metal scraps ruining the sig everywhere i cant see any men or person except that which looks like firing smthing or w/e, man this is rubbish if i tell ya(sorry but ya thats what i feel)
Even in a stock with multiple facets, u can get one person to be a focal, just target one person and doe effects on the rest of the stock except that person, it will automatically become focal.

KB speaks the truth. Fix it so we can do this properly!

Can't the effects were there. But I added more. =/
Guess it covered up the guy =/
I'll re-make it.